• Created by: Kathryn.C
  • Created on: 07-06-10 17:11

(Okay, here's my attempt at the beginning of a piece of descriptive writing for the English paper. I think it would be A/A* quality but it's up to you.)

Describe a Dark Alley at Night

To see it in the flesh, or brick and mortar as it truly is, can instil in ones heart a strange feeling of absolute terror for the shadowy recesses that leer and grasp at the cobbled pathway. When one is standing just on the precipice, the threshold between their world where they are but a single individual who can walk with unerring reassurance that no ‘monsters’ will jump out from the side-streets and from beneath the sewer-hatches, in comparison it is natural for one to experience an unusual


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